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:: Monday, April 21, 2003 ::
I have 8-10 hours of flight time and a few of hours of airport time as I travel to and from San Francisco this weekend.
Here's my 'to do' list for some of my songs (Note: Some of these comments are from raw42).
Whimsical Florence:
The slap bass keeps slipping out of time with the rest of the track. A shame cuz this is a good track!
I wouldnt hide behind the "experimental" mask btw.. this isn't experimental.. it's quality electronica.. just tidy up that slap bass!
Eleanor Duer:
dreamdaze, i am a big fan of your work, and i like the creativity here. however, i could not accept it because of the production quality. everything is really drowned out, and needs to be normalized and tweaked a bit. a bass boost would definitely help. i look forward to hearing more tracks soon, take care!
Grumbling Lizards:
Theres one fault in the track though, and it stood out both times i listened to it. The drum programming is cut and mixed well, yep, i know youve got like 5 breaks here all coming in and out, and they all roll very well.. except for that one with the tambourine percussion.
Take a listen to the cut off at 02:19 and then at 02:32. Its cut in mid sound and sounds pretty bad. I would suggest replacing that break with another simplistic one. That tambourine isnt doing you any favours!
Saying that, if you managed to get hold of recycle, which allows you to seperate all the different sounds out from a breakbeat, then you could use that instead, but im not sure your using a piece of software that will allow you to manipulate sound like that.
Meditative Spiritualism:
Take out vocals and resubmit.
Absolutely Modern:
Remix this and tweak it.
:: DJ 5:41 PM [+] ::
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